Hello fellow people today I will be showing you my persuade writing. A persuade writing is a writing explaining an a opinion you have, like a fight. In this we had to decide if changing New Zealand's name to Aotearoa was a good or bad idea. What is your opionion and why.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, October 1, 2021
100 word count
Hello my fellow friends how are you? Today I will be teling you about my 100 word count. This week's prompt was a phrase that said ' I have never seen the River bed so dry' this one had to be about climate change. Here is my story hope you engoy, what do you think of climate change.?
Wednesday, September 29, 2021
Follow up
Hello viewers today I will be telling you about my follow up work about water safety. For follow up work we hade to make a poster about water safety. here is mine hope you engoy have a good day or night wherever you are in the world.
Friday, September 17, 2021
Writing
Hello viewers, today I will be teling you about my writhing. This week we hade to write using an image. The image looked like this.
the story hade to be a narative. It hade to be disriptive, wene we changed paragraghs we used one of these time, topic, place, person (TTPP.) here is my story I hope you engoy. bye
Tuesday, September 14, 2021
Follow up work similies
Hello viewers today I wiil be showing you my follow up work. Our follow up work was to make a presentation about similies using the similies form a book. The book was called 'fridays night out'. The story had only 2 similies and we learnt that we should not overdo similies. here is a little presentation about the similies.
Friday, September 10, 2021
Lockdown Snapshot
Hello viewers today I will be telling you about my time in lockdown. The way I will be showing you is by using a google drawing. The google drawing has some things about lockdown and how I felt about being back. Please enjoy.
Friday, August 13, 2021
Naritive Writing
Hello viewers, how are you today? Today I will be telling you about my writing. It had to be about a specific picture. Mine Is not done yet. Here it is engoy.
picture to write about
story