Hello viewers, how are you today? Today I will be telling you about my writing. It had to be about a specific picture. Mine Is not done yet. Here it is engoy.
picture to write about
story
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello viewers, how are you today? Today I will be telling you about my writing. It had to be about a specific picture. Mine Is not done yet. Here it is engoy.
picture to write about
story
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
WOW Laura,you have a very imaginative imagination.Your use of words was brilliant!.I loved the way you used punctuation and paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteThis story ended WAY differently to what I thought was going to happen.
Thanks for a wonderful read.
Good morning Laura.
ReplyDeleteI hope all is going well for you and your family during this extended break from school.
Take care and keep safe.
It's been great seeing you at Google Meet in the mornings Laura.
ReplyDeleteWell done.Take care and have fun with your family.
Good afternoon Laura.
ReplyDeleteI hope you have a wonderful week.The sun is shining and it's quite nice outside.It is kind of cold but if you wrap up,it's ok.
I am looking forward to reading your next post Laura.
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful weekend.
See you tomorrow Laura.I hope you had a great break.
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