Hello fellow people today I will be showing you my persuade writing. A persuade writing is a writing explaining an a opinion you have, like a fight. In this we had to decide if changing New Zealand's name to Aotearoa was a good or bad idea. What is your opionion and why.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, October 1, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi bailey,
ReplyDeleteKelis here
your writing is really good. I also disagreed on changing the name to Aotearoa. do you like persuade writing?
Hey Bailey, I really like your writing. Do you like your writing??
ReplyDeleteHello Bailey.The great thing about New Zealand/Aotearoa is the freedom for all of us to have our own opinion.With time,it will get easier to spell words that we are unfamiliar with.
ReplyDeleteI know when I first started school,I found a lot of things difficult-the more I did it or practised,it got easier.
I do like your reasons.Well done and have a great holiday.
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday Bailey.
ReplyDeleteHello Bailey.I was just checking to see if there was any new post.
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful holiday.
I am just wishing you a happy week Bailey.Take care and keep warm.
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