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Friday, September 17, 2021

Writing

Hello viewers, today I will be teling you about my writhing. This week we hade to write using an image. The image looked like this.

the story hade to be a narative. It hade to be disriptive, wene we changed paragraghs we used one of these time, topic, place, person (TTPP.) here is my story I hope you engoy. bye          


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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2021 at 12:16 PM

    Wow, That was such a good blog post Laura. I like the first sentence. This is such a great blog post. Bye I hope you have a good day.

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  2. Mrs CassidySeptember 18, 2021 at 6:19 PM

    WOW Laura-impressive writing.You used strong words that made me want to read on.There was suspense and I enjoyed reading your work.

    When I take a group for writing,I sometimes give them a picture and they can write a made up story from what they can see.

    I look forward to reading more of your posts.

    Have a great weekend :)

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  3. Mrs CassidySeptember 26, 2021 at 4:35 PM

    Have a great week Laura.I look forward to your next post.

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