Hello viewers. Today I will be telling you about swimming at Canterbury Swim School. My swim teachers name is Huia. My favourite thing to do is diving, it may be scary but it is fun. I love to swim and its on of my favourite sports.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, October 29, 2021
Friday, October 22, 2021
Haiku Poem
Hello viewers, how are you?
Today I will be telling you about haiku poems. Haiku poems are Japanese poems that are three lines. Line one has 5 syllables, line 2 has 7 syllables and line 3 has 5 syllables. The poem is a momant in time all of them hade to be about a flower here is my 2.
Friday, October 1, 2021
Persuade writing
Hello fellow people today I will be showing you my persuade writing. A persuade writing is a writing explaining an a opinion you have, like a fight. In this we had to decide if changing New Zealand's name to Aotearoa was a good or bad idea. What is your opionion and why.
100 word count
Hello my fellow friends how are you? Today I will be teling you about my 100 word count. This week's prompt was a phrase that said ' I have never seen the River bed so dry' this one had to be about climate change. Here is my story hope you engoy, what do you think of climate change.?
Wednesday, September 29, 2021
Follow up
Hello viewers today I will be telling you about my follow up work about water safety. For follow up work we hade to make a poster about water safety. here is mine hope you engoy have a good day or night wherever you are in the world.
Friday, September 17, 2021
Writing
Hello viewers, today I will be teling you about my writhing. This week we hade to write using an image. The image looked like this.
the story hade to be a narative. It hade to be disriptive, wene we changed paragraghs we used one of these time, topic, place, person (TTPP.) here is my story I hope you engoy. bye
Tuesday, September 14, 2021
Follow up work similies
Hello viewers today I wiil be showing you my follow up work. Our follow up work was to make a presentation about similies using the similies form a book. The book was called 'fridays night out'. The story had only 2 similies and we learnt that we should not overdo similies. here is a little presentation about the similies.
