Hello readers today I'm going to show you my Recount writing this is about a circuse. I think this is a good stary. tell me what you think here it is.
It was a cold night in 2018 and we took the big blue bus to the theater for a circus because we got free tickets There were my siblings Annabelle, Riley and Logan, my parents mum and dad that came with me. The seats were uncomfortable but it didn't bother me I was too busy watching the show. When the show started the clowns went up the seats and talked to the people mostly kids and tried to make them laugh. There was a little boy who would keep coming onto stage and the parent clowns would keep trying to keep him backstage. It was so funny and I would keep laughing when he did that. There was a whole crowd of people and I was in the perfect spot. The clowns wore funny outfits. The baby wore light blue overalls and the host wore a tuxedo with a short ringed hat. An acrobat was in a hula hoop spinning round like a washing machine. A few moments later the special guest came, he was a chinese pole dancer. At the end of the circus we went out through a crowd all the way to the car and dad drove the family home.
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