Hello viewers today I will be telling you bout my Catch a Lot newspaper article. The first step was to watch the video called 'Catch A Lot'. Next step was to write a brainstorm of what happened. Third step was to write a catchy headline with alliteration. The forth step was to write the newspaper article with Short paragraphs ,Long Sentences, 3rd person, Past tense, Factual and Quotes. Once we finished we reread and changed some, RW it and changed some last is make a friend read it and comment.. RW is the puzzle part thing on your tool bar, it stands for read/write. It reads your story to you. This is how mine turned out. Please enjoy.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, April 16, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi laura amassing blog post i hve a qeston can you do anothor blog post next time?
ReplyDeleteHello Laura.
ReplyDeleteI don't blame Frank for not wanting to harpoon the whale.Too much of that happens in real life and it's sad that so much of the whale is wasted,that and there aren't that many left in the World.
I hope you had a great time going away on camp again.I can't wait to hear about it when we get back to school.
Hello Laura.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.