Hello viewers welcome back. Today I will be showing you my flower show drawing. Every year we have a competition for the best artwork.. Heres my drawing and the picture I copied.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, October 14, 2020
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Hi Laura. You have made a great start on your flower. I notice that the leaves are quite different sizes and shapes to the original picture. Can you look more closely at the original and try to make them more like that?
ReplyDeleteHello Laura.I really like the detail you have put into your rose.The way you have drawn it tells us it's a rose without writing what it is.When you draw the petals maybe you could draw the lines so that they are on a slant going from the middle of the leaf to the outside.Feel free to catch up with me at school and I can show you what I mean if you are unsure.🙂
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