Laura show don't tell story

 hello readers today I will be showing you my show don't tell story(show don't tell means you use agictives instead of saying "I'm happy") . I worked hard and love what iv done. please tel me what you think. I used NO felling words.

   Do you like competition? Do you like ballet?. It was a cold night and I was at “The ballet of the school show” (and other types this is a competition).the location was ###### theater it was tal with heaps of people flyers and the building was maid of red brick. I was waiting backstage, impatient, my heart beating and the people all so loud. I rushed to be ready. My stylest told me to calm down and we memorized the good things to forget the bad things. My stylist always makes me feel better. Soon it was show time I went to the stage. The song was magnificent. The crowd was engrossed to the show and I was dancing in my black tites checerd dress and brown hair. It was the show of the senchury. My heart beated fast as I danced gracefully in my dress. I had a big smile and my eyes were wide like frisbys. I was on my tippy toes tall as I can be wil there was cheering from the huge crowd.  I saw my family and friends I was the star of the show! At the end I couldn't stop puffing and when I was backstage I was running and shouting. When it was time for awards the man said “3rd place is the hairstylist ballet with a 100 dollar voucher to the warehouse and bronze medal” an.d they came to the stage to collect there things and gave a bow. Then the man spoke again “2nd place is an animal party with a 200 dollars voucher to the warehouse and silver medall” they got their things and gave a bow. And the man started to say again “with the $300 voucher and gold metall for first place” suddenly the drumroll started lights were going everywhere and the man shouted”THE BALLET OF THE SCHOOL SHOW!” I ran to the front, got my things and gave the prodest bow. When I got home from the theater we threw the biggest party. There was my favorite music, my friends, my team, my family and some of my fans. I grew up to be a famous ballerina and had heaps of fans.

                      

vocabulary

 hi readers today I will be showing you my vocabulary slidshow . the words were uncertain and dispute.

                    

2 ways to find ¼ of 60

 Hello kind readers today I will be showing you 2 ways to find 1/4 of 60. I made a video and I will show you it. I enjoyed making it I realy like my work and I hope you like it two. Here is my video and template tell me what you think.

               

scratch jnr

Hello viewers and welcome to my blog to day I will be showing you my space Jame video game I made on scratch jnr with someone who travels Zealand to teach people things on electronics here name is Emma. are characters are called sprites. I used algorithm to make them do what I want. I wish to do this again I liked it and it taught me something new. Please tell me what you think and if you would name my video game what would be comment down below. here is my video game and some images. 

        

kawa of care / how to care for your chromebook

 Hello readers today I will be showing you my kawa of care animation. Kawa of care is how to care for your electronic I did Chromebook. I like my work not my best but it had to be quick. I would like you to tell me what you think. Here is my animation.

                      

the force storyboard that.

 Kiaora readers today I am going to show you my Storyboard that. I had to focus on what the main characters feelings was and how they changed feelings throughout the story. this is my storyboard.

                     

I like my work and I wonder what you think so please tell me this is my first one. here is link to Storybourd that (THE LINK)

the present

Hello readers how are you today. today I will be showing you my present writing hope you egoy.

                                                    

I used google dokes. I like my writing the dog is playful like me and is very silly I can be muchore and silly. what do you think of my writing. 

speling

Hello readers welcome to my blog. Today I will be showing you what my sily sentence was. this was for my spelling activity take a look. we had to make silly sentence using as much of the ten words we chose as we could I used them all.