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Wednesday, July 29, 2020
opening sentence for my story the present.
hello readers and friends today I will be showing you what how I improved my first sentence of my story from boring to amazing. my w.a.l.t was writing an interesting first sentence to hook our reader. my first sentence was "One day I was at the adoption center waiting for a human to take me to a home." This was my improved sentence "It was a sunny day at the bright adoption center I was waiting for a human to take me to a home". we had to use the hook. this is an Image. 
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