Monday, May 25, 2020
returning to school.
hello viewers today I'm going to show you my returning to school Animation story. but this is just the begining. please read this story and give me some tips about my writing of how to make it beter. I rote about how I felt and why. please engoy. I think my writing is doing and it is amazing I wonder what you think?.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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kia Ora Laura,Thank you for sharing you're writing, I like how you were telling you're feelings. I also like the way you have put a Capital letter at the start of you're writing. Next time you could check you're spelling and re read you're writing so that it makes sense. Have an amazing day-Angel
ReplyDeletehi angel thank you for the comment thank you I will do that strat away and I hope you have a nice day two from Laura.
DeleteHello Laura.
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you are happy to be back.It's been great seeing your happy face.
What have you enjoyed most about being back at school?.